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Title The Butlerian Jihad
Author Brian Herbert & Kevin J. Anderson
Cover Art Stephen Youll
Publisher Tor - 2002
First Printing Tor - 2002
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Title The Machine Crusade
Author Brian Herbert & Kevin J. Anderson
Cover Art Stephen Youll
Publisher Tor - 2003
First Printing Tor - 2003
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Title The Battle of Corrin
Author Brian Herbert & Kevin J. Anderson
Cover Art Stephen Youll
Publisher Tor - 2004
First Printing Tor - 2004
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Title Hunting Harkonnen
Author Brian Herbert & Kevin J. Anderson
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Publisher Tor - 2005
First Printing Tor - 2002
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Title Whipping Mek
Author Brian Herbert & Kevin J. Anderson
Cover Art Stephen Youll
Publisher Tor - 2005
First Printing Tor - 2003
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Title The Faces of a Martyr
Author Brian Herbert & Kevin J. Anderson
Cover Art Stephen Youll
Publisher Tor - 2005
First Printing Tor - 2004
Category Science Fiction
Warnings None
Main Characters Xavier Harkonnen, Serena Butler, Vorian Atreides, Selim Wormrider, Norma Cenva, Aurelius Venport Omnius, Agamemnon, Erasmus, Tio Holztman, Iblis Ginjo, Jool Noret
Main Elements Artificial Intelligence, Empires
Website Brian Herbert




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I was excited to get into this trilogy. See, I've read all the "prequel" stuff in Tolkien's Middle Earth and felt that filling in the details of this major event that so reverberated through the Dune Universe would be interesting.

Except, it kind of wasn't. The first problem was, it was just too darn long. You have three books, at least the length f the original Dune novels if not longer, but it only covers a single event. In fact, it devolved into what I experienced reading Varney the Vampire, a penny-dreadful where author's got paid by the word, it got repetitive. While yes, we change point of views from chapter to chapter, I won't forget what happened a few chapters before so don't need a quick summary when I get back. I also won't forget character's motivations, even though there are way too many characters whose point of views we explore.

The second problem is just too much stuff gets stuffed into the three books. You have the machine war, fine. But somehow, in just this one 100 year time period, though there are at least 10000 more to go before we get to Dune, we get the genesis of, well, absolutely everything (so nothing new happen in 10,000 years, just the refinement of what started here...really?). We get the first Bene Gesserit. We get the first Navigator. We get the first Mentat. The first Suk doctor. The Fremen are settling Dune and, well, becoming Fremen. The effect of Spice are discovered. We get the schism that occurs between House Atreides and House Harkonnen...and yeah, to make that work, a beloved character had to do a full 180 personality change in the last few chapters, which I felt was a bit of a stretch, given that character was long-lived and had maintained a pretty steady personality, even when he did a kind of 180 change earlier, but that one was understandable. The flip at the end was just cruel.

I also don't like getting point of view chapters of characters that are being portrayed as pure evil, who wants to be in their head? And if you want them to be pure evil, they are going to come off as caricatures. Like the Titans, you get a scene where Agamemnon is miffed at something, so he goes and stomps on a few humans just to burn off some steam, or you get in Erasmus' head while he tortures his slaves. Evil characters are best seen through their action, inside their heads they turn into mustache twirling villains that laugh as they drown kittens, they become ridiculous rather than terrifying.

And finally, for me personally, since it was a brand new cast of a multitude of characters, I wasn't invested in anyone. It took three books for me to get interested in anyone at all, since so many characters get their chance at a point of view, no one character got much page time. It wasn't hard to keep them straight but somehow it was just too much. I guess that sums up most of my complaints - too many characters, too much repetitive sections, too much of the foundations of what comes later.

So...kind of lots of bad stuff there. I didn't hate the books, but they could have been so much better. I think the Tolkien prequels worked better since they were written as if they were legends (the language, the third-person perspectives, etc) and just a handful of books, mostly very short, covered epic periods of time. In Legends, we have too much covering a short period of time and since its all first-person, if you changed some terminology around, it wouldn't even have to be about Dune.

In the book The Road to Dune there are collected three short stories. The first takes place before the start of the first book, Hunting Harkonnen tells the tale of Xavier's older brother Piers who is shot down by the cymeks on what appears to be Caladan(?) and is hunted by them only to be rescued by a group of natives and he spends the rest of his life there. An exciting tale, but I didn't even remember Xavier had a brother so it didn't have as much interest as it could have had, though it tells how his parents died. The second takes place before the second book, Whipping Mek is about Vergyl, Xavier's adopted younger brother and his frustrations about being held back by his overprotective older brother and was a nice enough snippet about a character we didn't get to see too much of. The third, which takes place before the third book, The Faces of a Martyr felt a bit like the authors has some scenes they had to cut and just stuffed them into a short story, I didn't see the point of it, didn't feel it gave us anything much new (especially as I complained about the trilogy being overly long).




Posted: July 2022

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